The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Oppailolicus
Four of a Kind Ch. 2
Chapter 2 picks up exactly where Chapter 1 left off--the first meeting of Erica, our well-hung dickgirl heroine, and Bethany, her four-breasted study partner and object of desire.

Erica gets the tour of the house and admires Beth's body and describes it in great detail. During their study session, Erica notices something odd about her study partner, and commits quite the social faux pas...
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Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I like where this story is going. Still waiting for the BE, though.

Dexter Sinister
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Lovely! Want to see more!

Chris Yohn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I saw it coming :D I have a rare itch and your narrative knows how to scratch it so to speak!! I'm glad there's someone out there who has similar interests and is competent enough to illustrate it into words. Stories like yours are rare finds. Bravo Mr. Oppailolicus.

123
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

don't stop!

cman
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It ended at the worst possible time :) It was like a punch to the stomach! I crave more!

silentreader
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

NO, no, no. Don't stop it there. Everything had just taken a turn from interesting to awesome. Now I really can't wait for the next chapter.

I hope there are some sort of side effects from drinking her milk.

buddyu
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

my only real problem is that it wasn't longer. 3:)

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