spathicblond@yahoo.com
A young lady finds herself working a part time job at Christmas and feeling a bit overshadowed by her coworkers height and bust. All this changes when she gets her Christmas Bonus.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.50
- BE: 1.33
- Characters: 1.67
- Technical: 1.58
blunderbuss
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 2
Blah. Wish I'd checked ratings before wasting electrons
oddjob
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
notspam
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Just an attempt to sell something. Basically SPAM
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
lilhasselhoffer
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Four pages, in which nothing at all happens. This isn't worth downloading, and the plea for a paid download of the full story is absolutely sad.
Do not download this, and don't offer the deviantart link any traffic. There is nothing here that justifies a buy, and no reason for it to be posted here.
baz
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
waste of time, absolutely nothing in it but a shameless plug for his own site.
shakes head
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
What a waste of time. Not one bit if breast expansion in this teaser. It's nothing but spam for a pay site. Nothing to see here.
Not Paying
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Half story and charging for the rest? Ban please!
A Nony Mouse
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I'll give this a review but only after you send payment to my Paypal account.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
The pay portion is actually just for the pictures. The entire story is completely free. I liked it, though it is short.
Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
A link to a link to a paysite. Should be removed as spam, but there's no option to report.
anon
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I'm unamused that you decided to not upload the whole thing, but instead just a teaser with a link to deviantart. Poor show.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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