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A little something I wrote for a group on Deviantart. It features a D&D setting about a race of sexy humanoids called Mammorians who are all about huge breasts. let me know what you think, I love feedback!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 2.50
- Characters: 4.50
- Technical: 4.50
Arhus
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great first part, really enjoyed the descriptions and strong characterization. Hope there's more coming.
fourshot
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
not much description of the growth but an overall good read. I felt the ending was rushed, but concede that ending stories of any genre is one of the most difficult of tasks. I think it's a good sequel candidate.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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