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Coffee Pilot
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Fitting in at the Ren-Faire Ch9
Part 5, the 9th chapter (sorry for the confusion, I changed the numbering convention, the last chapter I posted, 4, is now part 4, containing chapters 7 and 8) of my now novella, Fitting in at the Ren-Faire! 

Maria may be free of the Ring of Desire, but she's enduring a much more dire transformation now! Having been cursed by sorcerer-witch Kalliana as punishment for philandering with the King, she now grows ever larger, both in bust and everywhere else, In addition, she is trapped as the Queen's royal wet-nurse, her ever lactating tits requiring almost constant attention. Her new found love, Allyn, must return, both to extricate her from nigh-enslavement, and to break her curse and restore her form. A transgendered Steven joins him as an unlikely ally, but will Allyn's plan be enough to deal with Kalliana's magic? And once free from the Ren-Faire, will they be able to get Maria's growth under control, or will her body take being liberated... literally?

This has been quite some time in the making, but on the plus side, I have two more chapters almost ready to post and a third on the way! Guess I was wrong about finishing it up in one more chapter. 

I'm posting two versions, one with a separate font for Ren-Faire speak, one all in the same font. Both are PDF. If there are folks out there who still can't handle PDF put in a comment and I can see about posting it in HTML or something.
Average Scores:

Daelon
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I'm glad to see you're still writing. I'm excited to see more of your alternate world.

Dovetrain
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Yes! One of the classics!

Pockets
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Finally.

Coffee Pilot
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Hope you all love the story! Sorry for the wait! What can I say, I'm an obsessive perfectionist with bouts of writers block.

Posting in comments as I didn't want to glut up the description too much, just threw in ratings as to how I felt personally about my work, not trying to skew anything.

As the forums here are sadly pretty much dead, I'm also setting up a Deviantart account in case people want to comment/chat/respond to comments/etc etc. I also plan on reposting revised, reformatted, improved, redux versions of all the previous chapters. Username is Coffeepilot.

I still invite you all to please post comments and reviews here, and I hope that some day this site gets its forums back under control. Wishing you all the best Mr HHH!

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