The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

MysteryGuy9215
Battle In Justicia
Two girls entering a virtual world encounter a mysterious enemy with a strange and powerful ability.
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 ktc
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
I enjoyed it quite a lot. Sequel?
 The Almighty Popo
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5 
Nice descriptions and interesting concept. I guess my only real complaint is that it was too short. Keep up the good work, bro!
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