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The Overflowing Bra

tusdine
tusdine@gmail.com
Same Difference: Chapter 11
Jim finds himself in high demand as the other twin sister desperately needs attention.
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 MadMacs2010
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Tusdine, I am really enjoying this story I love the characters and the building romance. I'm left wondering where we are going on this trip though the sisters earlier sinister threat for the employees left me afraid of a sad/somber ending. You write a very good intimate scene and the plot construction so far is very enticing. You spin a good yarn, please keep it up.
 Epic
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Finally, a fleshed out AE story!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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