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The Overflowing Bra

SapphireBlueHearts
Fullfillment (Chapter 4)
Lucy is at last lactating, and experiences her first full day adjusting to the changes in her body.
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wei
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

enjoyed it very much. How about you make her manipulate people(Vincent?) with her huge bust ?

Lopar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Perfect. I love self initiated growth. I love when the girl loves it herself and shows off. I also love when it stays in [big] category and doesnt move to "Z cups second time around alphabet". Please keep don't go much bigger.

deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

A good bridge to, hopefully, greater things to come. The suspense is killing me! :)

PeterBE
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Really enjoying this series very much. Love the foreshadowing and hints that Vincent knows more than he is letting on, and it leading Lucy down the primrose path to immobility.

Would love to see more verbose descriptions of the BE and how Lucy experiences it.

Vash
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Well written nice continuance of the story. I like the not so subtle hinting at what is hopefully be much bigger things... Keep up the good work

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