The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Dexter Sinister
All Right, Mister
A domineering seductress makes demands on her target, with surprising (to him) consequences.
Average Scores:
 sissypaula
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4 
how i wish this would happen to me.
 TheEarl
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 3 
Loved the POV and the descriptions. Hard to pull off this kind of story and they're pretty rare, so it's a real treat to find a good one.
 Someone Else
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 1, Technical= 3 
It was a painful and confusing read.
 A Fan
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4 
Very much enjoyed the POV of this story as well as the content. Thanks!
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