I'm not sure how fast one should update these things, but response to Part 1 was positive, so I decided to move forward with part 2. This part focuses less on the backstory and more on the characters as well as the expansion. Critique is very welcomed. A simple review goes a long way.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.40
- Characters: 4.60
- Technical: 4.60
sovair
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Personally, I very much enjoyed the works of this particular story, although I very much agree with ktc, maybe this would be better in a comic format.
clownboat
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story, Im not normally into GTS stories but this one is great! Please continue! Only flaw was how grumpy the main character was although I suppose propriety was everything in that time.
Score
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good story, hope you continue it.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
It's great, though since your preference on how they grow is so "visual" I feel like your writing would translate best in comic form. I am anxious to see how much growth there is.
JL
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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