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The Overflowing Bra

Ethereal Vision
The Late Blossom/The New Queen
Abigail always thought she'd been passed by in the size department.  Turns out she was right!  A fairy comes to help her out, and her brother ends up with some life changing alterations as well!

This is an older story I had written a few years back.  I went through and edited what I could catch and expanded on the story quite a bit.  These characters have been added to the the Universe created within The New Girl.  I hope you all enjoy! 
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MadMacs2010
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

On the whole, I too enjoyed the story, but, I felt the ending seemed a little rushed, however this did not detract from a good story with room to ...er... grow.

Voodoo
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I enjoyed it

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