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Ghost of Christmas
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Diabolical Girl ( 1 + 2 )
14 + 9 pages | BE driven Story ( not story driven )  | Both stories in RTF ONLY |  Little Diabolical Girl get's another addition to it's pool | The second part of the Story was checked by "The editor" | The first is still the version checked by "Trixielle Lunare"  | Special thanks to the editors | I hope "the editor" and I have a fruitful cooperation in the future as well. | As always I hope this inspires other writers to post their stuff on this site.  
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I like your stories, despite the repetition found in most. I do hope you continue writing.

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