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Another 8 Page story.
Again this includes Breast Expansion and Penis expansion. This time in about the same proportions.
This is more STORY/COMEDY and less SEX/EXPANSION heavy it's also more realistically sized in the end. ( well duh, I went overboard in the last one. )
It's also written better I believe ( and hope ) , but no second checker once again.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.00
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 1.00
- Technical: 1.00
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
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Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
cant read need other format
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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