Keith is a man who has lost his voice, but his wife has found a solution. What side effects could this solution possibly have? This my first story so be sure to comment and rate!
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.20
- BE: 3.00
- Characters: 3.60
- Technical: 4.00
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Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I really love this style, where changes go unnoticed. Please make another!
BEman
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I would have liked to give this story higher ratings due to the facts is quite a bit above average in most reguards, but the simple fact it felt rushed and process seemed like an after fault knocked my ratings down.
That being said, I am really looking forward to see more of this, with the hope that a little bit of pacing.
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is a great introduction to what has the potential to be an amazing story, and I can't wait to see more. Not much BE in this one, but I'm sure that will be fixed in the next installment.
el burro
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Holy hell Tisbury, you're complaining about it having inaccurate Latin? This is porn for crying out loud.
Nice setup, interested to see where it goes. Better written than most on here.
Xanadu
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
I like it, though there are definitely technical issues to be worked out. I hope you continue the story.
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked it personally, but the overall quality isn't quite a 5. Look forward to the next.
SD
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Awesome, one of my favorite setups.
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Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Tisbury/Blackjacket
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
The Latin is taken from something like Google Translate; it's not conjugated or declined correctly. Rather disappointing.
anon
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Interesting setup, but the BE seems incidental.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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