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The Overflowing Bra

Ethereal Vision
The New Girl: Fun for all
Chapter two in the New Girl series!  Alexis decides to change John and take her out for some fun with her friends Dean and James.  Sexy times ensue!

Sorry for the wait on this one.  I have more in mind with this story than I did on my previous tales.  So hopefully you don't have to wait long for part 3!  

I have put the first chapter in the zip file as well.
Average Scores:

Chaos_Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Awesome story telling Ethereal. Will there be any hermaphrodite antics in future chapters? Either way, please keep writing such intriquing stories.

Drysik
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very good story. I enjoyed it and am looking forward to the next part and the possibility of Dean and James getting in on the TG transformations.

Bobking11
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Truly fantastic, one of the best TG stories i have ever read. Please make more.

Daelon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Keep up the good work. I keep hoping to see some mental alterations, but that's more my kink I guess. The transformations are well described, and the story is very well executed.

deus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great work. I can't wait for the next part!

ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It's a good read, I'll be honest when I say I preferred the lesbian sex at the end but that is probably just me.

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