The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Adam Plantz
The Geek
A shy, awkward, nerdy girl comes to terms with her obsession and addiction to huge breasts.
Average Scores:

Anonymous
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 2

Characters were as deep as "I like big tits" and everyone seemed really eager to just fire off orgasms every other sentence. Laughed and had to stop reading after seeing "TFO". Not a great story but not terrible.

Settler
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Very great story! Thanks i love this kind please more of these!!!

deux_anges
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Excellent as usual. Likeable characters and excellent BE descriptions.

deus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

Good stuff as usual. I took off a point on technical because there was some your/you're mistakes, but other than that I don't remember any glaring issues.

AuzzieMan224
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Didn't exactly click for me (probably because I'm not an implant-BE fan), but it was still fucking awesome! Great work! Oh, and copy and paste your work into Word or something, because there are a few grammatical errors you haven't fixed. Other than that, beauty, mate!

Dirk
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Always look forward to your stories, keep writing. Please!! And when is the next Juggernauts coming out? 2.0??

Grimmy
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great story, love the focus about the BE

OAO
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well written and incredibly hot. Give yourself a pat on the back for this one.

XXX
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Nothing more to say!

Keep moving...

Tarquin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Fucking amazing. It's that good. Great theme and his writing is really good. Read it!

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