Part 4 of ... 7? Weren’t there 5 before? Yes, as those tales are wont to do, they tend to grow beyond what was planned — just like poor Barbara’s breasts will swell beyond her worst expectations in this new part of the mermaid story that so far has failed to produce even one single mermaid.
Never fear, there are indeed sirens, just ... not yet. For now, see the love-and-hate triangle of boobs-bulging Barbara, mischievous Menena and horse-hung David come to a fateful crunch in Siren Song Part 4: Beyond The Prize Cow! Oh, and as usual, comments always welcome, y’know.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 5.00
- Characters: 4.60
- Technical: 5.00
MadMacs2010
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Paul, as always, you deliver on all fronts (particularly Barbara's). Well done, I'm really enjoying this story (though still hoping that Yrba might come back - I like her, she's a great character), keep up the good work m8.
xxx
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
8790
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Secretly hoping Menena will turn good.
bob
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very good! People are losing control. Im waiting to see where this goes!
Tarquin
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent! Excellent! Excellent! THIS is how it's done! I even tore myself away from the story halfway through, to give it an absolutely-deserved rave review. More later, but thanks for a terrific read.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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