The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Brij Fisher
phished84@aol.com
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dranon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

wow... i've really enjoyed these. PLEASE keep writing!

really stoned [8]
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

it make my penis very happy

Duuude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Vety nice! Please continue! You are on my list of authors to keep checking for new material.

belooo
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

totaly agree with the first comment. Nice to read.

A guy
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I liked it a lot, it just ended a little abruptly. I'd like to see a little more to the ending or at least a fleshing out of the final part.

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