In a world where the average cup size is somewhere around the modern-day G, where normal breast size has been so inflated many women can't walk without assistance, where about one in every five women has some sort of genetically-verified mutation that can cause a number of interesting and sexy effects, Penny Parson is so unremarkable that it's remarkable. Flat, skinny as a board, and quickly approaching the end of high school, she spends most of her days moping and grouching and jealously watching her friends and enemies, and most of her nights dreaming of what life could be like. But when her own belated changes start appearing, Penny is in for a few rather awesome surprises.
I wish I could write like this.
As others have said, this may be the best body expansion story I have ever read. I can't believe it took me this long to find it and read it.
My only complaints, which are very minor.
It's never explicitly stated within the story what "heat cups" are. I can infer from the context of their use that it basically has something to do with temporary beast expansion associated with female arousal (ie. like an animal in heat). As this becomes key later in the story, a bit more background might have helped.
The cup sizes within the story are never completely explained, yet they are used heavily as a means of description and proportion. Going from A to B within the context of the story seems to imply going outside of the normal range of everyday bra measurements, so that a B might be in the F+ range of today's measurements. It took me about half of the story before I started to develop some kind of size reference for the measurements being thrown around, but I think the breast sizes - and sizes in general - could have benefited more from some real world items as reference points, rather than the home-brewed bra measuring system used in the story.
I like revenge stories a lot, but the resolution to Veronica's subplot was a bit tame. I'm not sure what else could have been done, but for a character that literally "tormented" our main heroine throughout the story, in the end she didn't really end up all that bad. I suppose it was a sweet ending after all that she became quasi-friends with everyone. I was kind of hoping for more somehow... lol.
I liked the ending a lot. Some of the reviews said otherwise, but I felt it gave closure to pretty much all of the main characters.
Thank you for taking the time to write this.
Fantastic. A bit repetitive when it came to comparisons as to how large something/someone was, but other than, pretty much flawless.
Please write more pear mutation (maybe other girls)! Thank you for this amazing peace of art of AE.
Absolutely fantastic. I can only be one of the many who have already called this story a masterpiece, but I honestly have not had erotica hit me so hard in such a long time--so much so that although I read the entire thing without access to the internet, I couldn't wait to get to a computer so I could commend you on this absolutely wonderful piece of writing.
As someone who literally enjoys everything, this was just a godsend. When you've taken care of what you intended and you still can't stop reading, that's when you know you're looking at a great story. I look forward to more great works from you!
This is the closest thing I've seen to a perfect story on this site. There's literally something for everyone, it's well written, and it manages to avoid feeling repetitive despite its length and the repeated use of dream sequences. There are some minor grammar issues that involve referring to the male lead with female pronouns a few time, but other than that, like I said, it's damn near perfect.
Well done, Mich. Well done.
Incredibly wonderful, agree that the only issues was the difficulty of judging the breast sizes at points, due to then new system.
I enjoyed reading the story (damn took just over two hours) and the depth of the characterization work and technical quality were top notch. But towards the end I couldn't shake the feeling that it was dragging out a bit after the hints in the middle of the narrative clued in the reader as to where it would all end. I also felt the ending was very sudden.
That said, for a fully fledged story it's still great work and I'd happily read more of your work if submitted.
I'd echo what everyone has already said, it's a masterpiece. But I will point out something people have neglected to mention: Your characters are excellent and so is the dialogue. They clearly do a lot of the heavy lifting scene wise, which is how it's supposed to work. So good job there as well.
It's truly wonderful when an actual writer goes and punches out an instant classic. There's some decent stories written by people who CAN write, but they're not writers, and it shows. Natural talent is easy to spot.
Do yourself a favor and rest on your laurels a bit. There's no need to try and top this. But please do keep writing as much as you can.
Mich, you are a legend. As a man with varied tastes I love all of your stories, but I'm shocked you managed to top Rebellious Phase. I thought that story had been near-perfect, lacking only more weight gain/stuffing. And here you have a story where weight gain is the ultimate mutation (until the end, that is). And it's great to see you give equal time to the ass growth and preggos.
I salute you, sir!
I hope to see more pear mutation stories and more girl with this mutation!
Excellent story! has everything for everyone, great storytelling
Amazing story. Easily the best of the year.
Well done, well bloody done. This was thoroughly entertaining, well written and easily the best thing submitted to this site in years. To say the ending fell flat is like comparing great to greatest.
Please, for the love of god, save us from this deluge of crappy stories by writing more, I implore you.
amazingly written, but I must say I expected a bit more for the ending. a 120 page story that keeps on giving.
I really enjoyed this one; you obviously spent a lot of time world-crafting and it shows. Your characters have a warm realism to them, and the whole thing in general is just great. Like the one other fellow said though, a bit more depth in the growth descriptions might be nice; but then again, I'm a description guy, and everyone's got different tastes. Anyways, now that you've created this new world of yours, I hope you'll keep filling it up with characters and stories. Keep up the good work!
Loved the multiple dreams, but very disappointed by the ending.
Best growth story I've read in a long time!
Certainly one of the best stories on the archive. There is something here for everyone and as someone who simply has a size/growth fetish I enjoyed the entire thing.
Most minor of notes. I think the actual BE could have used some more detail. the whole new cup size thing made it harder to visualize. There we also some occasional grammar mistake, but in a story this size it doesn't surprise me.
Best new story in years.
Probably the best story in 5 years. The only thing I would ask for is a bit more details on the breast growth. Real cup sizes, an idea of how many inches she grew over night, how many pounds gained (and pounds of boob!), etc.
Awesome story
I througly enjoyed reading this. I would not mind reading more stories in this universe where new mutations were found (gts is the main one off the top of my head).
What a great story. Only giving it a 4 on enjoyment because of the not-legal-age characters, that always makes me a little uncomfortable. Other than that, easily one of the best stories on here.
Excellent story, as usual, and I especially liked the multiple dream aspect, but the grammar and spelling could use some a second pair of eyes in some places.
Bravo. A fully-realized setting, funny, realistic characters, and very well described growth.
One critique (and I'll be vague, since it's about the ending): about halfway through, I guessed the ending, but at about the three-quarters mark I said "no, he can't be going with that. It'd be too trite, and he's a better writer than that." I was slightly disappointed to see you did end up going with what you did, because I think it seems too on-the-nose, but I still highly enjoyed it on its own merits.
Easily one of the best and most entertaining stories I've ever read! Definitely something for everyone here. I gotta say, you have an excellent talent for writing, and I can't wait to see what you do next!
Simply put. The best the story on this archive. I want Mich to try to outdo this if he can. It is amazing. 0 flaws. I wish I had something constructive to say...but I don't. pErfect
Absolutely wonderful read, something for everyone.
Wonderful. Very well done all round.
Nice story. But, what is a heat cup?
Incredible. Best story I've read in a long time.
Please make more!
One of the best story i´ve ever read!
This is most definitely the best story on the front page, and one of the best on this entire site. Just... wow. You outdid yourself on this one
Wow. Just wow. I almost want to complain about the length, which normally I would. But with this story, I kinda wish it was longer. It's that entertaining.
Lots of detail, excellent, grammatical writing and a scene to fit every fetish, with truly impressive and clearly drawn growth for each. Even some nice PE as a bonus.
The best story that I've seem here in a long time!
Thanks!!
A long and enjoyable read. The bust sizes were hard to gauge since you reinvented the system, but it was fun none the less.