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The Overflowing Bra

Erika
Erikas Tale
This isn't a BE fiction tale, more of an introduction. I've always wanted to talk about how my obsession with breasts grew with my own pair, so what better place to do it? Feedback appreciated
Average Scores:

Adric127
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Very good I hope to see more stories from you keep up the good job 
Q
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Awesome story, I always wanted to get into the head of a woman with an exploding chest (who actually thought about what was happening). My wife didn't pay much attention when hers grew in (she's a 38DD+ *drool*) You should try fenugreek and fennel herbal supplements. They promote breast growth, and there's a few others that do as well such as saw palmetto. Try taking about 5 capsules of each of these a day for a month, and if your genetics are compatible (which they seem to be) you will defiantly see your "dough" start rising! It'll be slow, but permanent!

I could write an essay about how these work, but I'll just suffice to say they're totally legit, not to mention harmless (It's ground up plant seed for peet's sake.) and cheep, compared to those "breast enhancement" pill concoctions that they try to pass off for ~$200 a bottle. Turns out these herbs are the main ingredient anyway 9 times out of ten! and I've gotten bottles 120 pills the local health food store for less then $30.

Can you say "brew your own boobs kit"? =P

Kodos
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Whether or not it's all true, I do hope you keep on writing as if it is. You hit all the right touches; a lesser writer wouldn't have been content with "I've always liked watching other girls' boobs" and felt the need to throw in a busty lesbian orgy or something. I'm just saying, your writing has a great naturalness to it, and even if not a word of it is true, it's written in a way that makes it sound so very possible that I want to believe. So anyway, don't be dissuaded by doubters, but keep up the good work. If you're simply a writer, than please keep writing, and if you're really just a growing girl, then by all means, do keep us updated regarding your expanding horizons.

Toymaker
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

I liked the way it was written- it definitely had the feel of a first-hand account, which made me like the character (you).

I'd have liked a little more emphasis on the growth, even though it happened slowly from a temporal perspective, as far as the writing went, it went really, really fast. Even something like breaking down the jump to a C to the revelation of being a B or something like that would have helped stretch it out and make the BE part a little more substantial.

I hope you can get past your worry of being found out (though I'm surprised that you'd include pictures, if that was a legitimate fear), and continue to share with us.

Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I am pretty sure this is legit tit, since she lets in bits of detail as far as daily life, but doesn't make it sound like a dating profile or softcore pron. I'd totally look forward to hearing more from you be it here or on the forums or elsewhere, if only because your writing style is a breath of fresh air.

Naughtychaswick
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Thanks for sharing!

Nobody Important
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Grammar correction: In the final paragraph, you hope you are not "vindicated" by the community. Vindicate effectively means "to justify". Perhaps you meant "Vilify"?

Don't rely on spellcheck, kids. It will lead you astray.

As to whether or not this is nonfiction, I am unconvinced, but I don't think it ultimately matters. On its own merits, the story leaves me with a kind of "meh" opinion. The main character, while likeable enough in a humble/innocent role, doesn't really get any significant depth or dimensionality. Additionally, the BE description itself feels lacking. I get that having the breasts is enjoyable, but I can't help but think "show, don't tell" applies here.
This is far from the worst story you'll find on this site, and the pictures are a nice touch, but I feel there is a good deal of room for improvement. Best of luck.

Author
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Hey everyone, this is the author. Before this gets big I want to say that I used someone else's computer to write and post my story because I was scared of something exactly like this happening. I didn’t know that the author’s name was included in the document, but that was exactly the type of thing I wanted to avoid. It took a lot to come out like I did, but it’s still not something I wanted to make public. The person whose computer I used is my best friend and yes, inspiration for my pen name. He’s a good person who didn’t ask questions when I asked him not to, and I’d really like not to involve him in this. I would greatly appreciate it if this never reached him – anyone else who hasn’t told their friends about their BE fixation can probably relate.

Double S B
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Hate to burst everyone's bubble, but this story is fiction. Author left their name in the author field and definitely a dude.

Chris M Yohn
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

wearing clothes you out grew. admitting to looking at women's chests. boobs 'rising like dough.' HAWT. This new author has desirable personal experience. No grammar issues is a plus!

Sobtac
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Engaging, informative and interesting; great to hear from someone like you. Hope you enjoy yourself and if you ever feel like sharing more 'everyone' in here appreciates it.

jrepg
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You're adorable and posting your e-mail address was bold. I'm curious how many marriage proposals you've had from the site.

PunStar
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

That was swell(ing?) :P

MrHHH
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This totally counts as a BE story. :)

Polymorf
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It's wonderful to hear the real-life stories. I know when my children's mom got pregnant, I loved the fact that she went from a 32A/B cup to overflowing a 44DDD (the largest nursing bra that could be found) but with still a 36 bandwidth. For those doing the math, that's a 36J/K (which she unfortunately hated), but to hear someone who loves growing, and as cute as you are, it's great! Keep going and maybe turn your real-life into fiction with experimental pills or something, and (as bad as it sounds) keep the pictures coming if possible, unless you want to hide from those readers there at your school...

tfad22
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Erika, may I say this was an absolutely wonderful story. Most nonfiction on this site leaves something to be desired, but yours really was a thrill to read. I sincerely encourage you to try your hand at writing fiction. TOB needs more writers like you.

deus
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Great intro. I will echo other commenters in saying that I would love for you to write some fiction. Maybe some of the fantasies you alluded to in this intro?

On the topic of your size, I hope you are happy with a 32DD, that's quite the impressive ratio!

One small technical note, I don't think "vindicated" means what you think it means.

Thank you for sharing!

Kowalski
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wonderful! Thank you for sharing. I look forward to reading your stories.

Dav e
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Esuna - try libreoffice or openoffice - free and they read docx.

Erica,

Extremely well written! Great to get a real woman's perspective. Would love to see a pic of you "showing off" (clothed, of course), but understandable if you want to stick to the two in the file already.

I definitely encourage you to write BE fiction. Start with your fantasies, and keep going (and going, and going) :) You write well, both technically precise and engagingly.

Maybe something like pre-natal vitamins would help give you a bust boost?

If you could pick a size for yourself, how big would you like to grow in real life? In fantasy?

Esuna
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Its time once again for Esuna to give all fives so as not to offset the ratings so she can ask for a version of this story that she can read.

I really want to read this story of yours....but my set up can't read .dox files. If its not too much trouble can we get a rtf or txt version of this story?

The Martian
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It's a pleasure to meet you Erika, and welcome!

It sounds like you have really experienced life on both sides of the flat/busty divide. Plus it was refreshing to have a real life story posted here for a change. I hope you inspire more women to share their experiences of growing up and growing out.

You should definitely keep writing as well, you seem to have a knack for it. I look forward to reading more of your work, keep it up!

pobblebonk
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Not too often we get BE non-fiction around here, despite the fact that it happens to every woman you see.
Well written story, looking forward to seeing more from Erika.

ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

The lower BE rating is because as you stated, its not really a BE story. Real or not, this hit nail on the hammer for me. Maybe its because my biggest fantasy is to meet a girl who shares my fetish, and no actual fantasy story could compare if that happened. Maybe I'm wrong, but I sure wouldn't be complaining if it happened.

fourshot
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I think your a welcome addition to our community. I do enjoy a real life story. Don't forget to introduce yourself at the forum.

Melon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4

I love this. I dont know if its genuine, but I enjoyed it regardless.
Im always interested in how other people discovered their interest in BE. The female perspective is certainly new to me.

I find it interesting that you mention being an Anime fan. I feel that Anime contributed to my fascination with exceptionally large breasts.

Anyway, I really do hope you write some fiction.
^_^

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