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Just a bit of BE, but a LOT of PE. Our protagonist finds that each orgasm makes his cock grow. Can his wife's girlfriend help?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.55
- BE: 1.64
- Characters: 4.45
- Technical: 4.55
SilentReader
Overall= 5, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Here is my honest review of the story. My apologies for my quick assumptions but I have seen it happen in the past. My jumping to conclusions mostly came from the use of different usernames between the two sites without any reference to your other work from the other account.
I also have no idea how to take down my old review. Cheers!
Megamelonomaniac
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great story--even without the BE I enjoyed reading it! Thanks!
The Rail
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A very well written story, despite the lack of actual BE - the characters are fun if somewhat cartoon-ish and the plot is outright lovely.
Very well done, I'd look to see more of your work.
The Maven
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Can someone contact SILENTREADER for me? I want him/her to know: I AM the author, I AM the guy who posted this story to LPSG.org. I plan to post it to Literotica too, actually.
Silentreader, if you will take down your low rating of my story, I will take down this, my biased rating of this story. I couldn't find another way to tell you. I tried to register for the forum, but was unsuccessful. And I wish you had asked, rather than assumed that I am dishonest. Thank you.
Collector
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
As with most of the feedback you will probably see, this was a terrific story that lost marks only due to the low focus on BE. I, for one, don't mind at all, and hope to see more from you!
SilentReader
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
Copied from lpsg.com so unless you are the original author please indicate that you are hosting this storing and not the one who wrote it.
Scoring based on your honesty.
Professor Grow
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Fantastic story, I would love to see more like this.
Daiyuki
Overall= 4, BE= 1, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
What kind of a solution was that?! xD Good read otherwise, could use more description on the breast growth other than passing mentions and "triple in size" references.
ktc
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
PE, while an enjoyable read, is not what I come to the site for. It was well written, and beats the pants off a lot of the stories posted here. My score is bias to the minimal amount of BE and my own personal preferences. Read if you want a good sex story with enjoyable characters.
Geoffk
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Agree. Really a PE story with minimal BE, but super-hot, well-written and very enjoyable.
The Light Fantastic
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I really enjoyed this! BE was lacking, as you said, but that really wasn't the focus of the story. Well-crafted, well-written.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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