Here is my honest review of the story. My apologies for my quick assumptions but I have seen it happen in the past. My jumping to conclusions mostly came from the use of different usernames between the two sites without any reference to your other work from the other account.
I also have no idea how to take down my old review. Cheers!
Great story--even without the BE I enjoyed reading it! Thanks!
A very well written story, despite the lack of actual BE - the characters are fun if somewhat cartoon-ish and the plot is outright lovely.
Very well done, I'd look to see more of your work.
Can someone contact SILENTREADER for me? I want him/her to know: I AM the author, I AM the guy who posted this story to LPSG.org. I plan to post it to Literotica too, actually.
Silentreader, if you will take down your low rating of my story, I will take down this, my biased rating of this story. I couldn't find another way to tell you. I tried to register for the forum, but was unsuccessful. And I wish you had asked, rather than assumed that I am dishonest. Thank you.
As with most of the feedback you will probably see, this was a terrific story that lost marks only due to the low focus on BE. I, for one, don't mind at all, and hope to see more from you!
Copied from lpsg.com so unless you are the original author please indicate that you are hosting this storing and not the one who wrote it.
Scoring based on your honesty.
Fantastic story, I would love to see more like this.
What kind of a solution was that?! xD Good read otherwise, could use more description on the breast growth other than passing mentions and "triple in size" references.
PE, while an enjoyable read, is not what I come to the site for. It was well written, and beats the pants off a lot of the stories posted here. My score is bias to the minimal amount of BE and my own personal preferences. Read if you want a good sex story with enjoyable characters.
Agree. Really a PE story with minimal BE, but super-hot, well-written and very enjoyable.
I really enjoyed this! BE was lacking, as you said, but that really wasn't the focus of the story. Well-crafted, well-written.