A story set in Dexter Sinister's State of Emergency world. Having been given a chance to regain their youth, Joyce and Percival King have some catching up to do. They also meet some young ladies who have a new perspective on life.
(Follows on from State of Emergency - Beth Parts 1 & 2)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.80
- BE: 4.20
- Characters: 4.80
- Technical: 4.80
Ano
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Ato34G
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Great work. Excited to see what the girls come out looking like.
Dexter Sinister
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Left me hanging! Want to see the next chapter! :)
Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Not much BE, but I hope you put up the continuation of the story soon. I want to know what happens next...
Anon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I especially loved the girls going inside Mrs. King and am looking forward to the next chapter!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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