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The Kingdom of Nordia suffers a treacherous attack from its neighbors causing creation of a revengeful being wrecking havoc on the earth
I believe that a story similar to this can not be completed by the thoughts of one author , and it should feed from the thoughts of others.
Thus I but it in your hands for your review, and wait for your inputs on it. you can always contact me on evil.hind@hotmail.com . and I would really appreciate it if you inform me of any sequel
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.44
- BE: 4.11
- Characters: 4.22
- Technical: 4.00
monica
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
wizardm
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Greatly written, its one of the best readings , I really wish there is a sequel
Dr.J
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Perfect epical story, the ideas are first of a kind , the sittings are extreme , witchcraft, mind control , muscle growth, breast expansion , and porn. I cant ask for more
hugeM
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
joe
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
Extremely dark, depressing, evil. These kinds of stories screw people up
nicki
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
greentree
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
just amazing, and the fact that its open ending and sequel events can be added by other authors is giving a new way of collaborative thinking
Marshal
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
The story is amazing , full of detailed descriptions of events and characters.
The ratio of vocabulary and grammers mistakes compared to the story size is minimal . and knot is rarely seen in this kind of genere
I wish there would be a sequel
elvis again
Overall= 3, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
This is a good story, badly told, and appallingly written.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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