Sally is exposed to some radioactive waste and is transformed into a catgirl. (9766 words)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.75
- BE: 4.13
- Characters: 3.88
- Technical: 4.50
Coffee Pilot
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very good. Enjoyed it both for the BE and because I love a good catgirl TF. Really enjoyed the tasteful use of fat growth in that you managed to make her plumper and sexier. Like other reviewers I also enjoyed the increase in horniness without a decrease in IQ. Looking forward to reading more.
a
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Any way to continue expansion in the next chapter?
ktc
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
This is more in line with what I've enjoyed about BE stories. I can do without the cat girl, but in this particular case what I enjoyed was the absence of rape, dominance etc and just a great presence of character, the subtle humor and the female characters transformation was also pretty awesome (horny girl who's still smart good, horny girl who's retarded not so much). I feel I'm overly critical of your work but if I had to say anything about your writings I will say I liked this one the most. Your back story was interesting, and your characters were real enough with their personalities to really make this one shine to me. I read erotica for the sex like everyone else (mostly BE) but a good character and story never hurts.
The Preve
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Veddy, veddy good! I'm not too much into catgirls and fur but I love curves. The story is very well written and you seem to have set up some interesting characters.
etherealvision
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I liked it a lot. I would like to see more as well.
OM NOM NOM
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good stuff, though the stomach expansion seemed a bit tacked on.
Martin Luther
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Very good chapter with a seemingly unessecary backstory. If there are more chapters, please stray away from making the main character a fat blob or Mister Universe. Development of characters is nice too.
funfun74
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I enjoyed the story. Can't wait for chp. 2. Hope there are more TF's to come.
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