Yoga loving Odetta Lucessi gets stung...and stung...and stung... A corrected version in ODT format. Hopefully it works.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 4.20
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.80
Requiem
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Really good! It's also quite weird, but good! Keep up with the good work!
Chaos Master
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I love it! When Pierce said his lines for a simplified reason the bees use female mammals, I could barely stop giggling! One thing that you might consider for your next story, maybe write a story with a larger cast of characters.
Please keep up the imaginative work! I will look for your name in future with high hopes.
Xero
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
The vocabluary was on point and made the story flow with out fail. Keep it up.
ktc
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I am both disturbed (I absolutely hate bee's) and aroused at the same time it's ridiculous. Certainly great writing quality, definitely a different approach for the site.
OM NOM NOM
Overall= 2, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Well this was...different. Not for me, but there was no problem with the writing or anything like that.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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