Model a beach hot Sun and a Softdrink ( The Second Story, same as before not in English )
Average Scores:
- Overall: 1.00
- BE: 1.00
- Characters: 1.00
- Technical: 1.00
Soylent
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
"Not in English" nor anything else really. What was the point of posting this?
mtb
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Bitte stoppen. Ihre Geschichten sind hier nicht willkommen.
fed up
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Who moderates this site? Do they read this? Stuff like this makes a mockery of everything. If an honest attempt is made, that counts for something, but this "author"'s submissions are an insult.
Trollkeeper
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Please do not feed the trolls.
Dukat
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
stories like this one do serve a purpose: they make the other, well-written stories look good/better.
fu
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Please stop. You are ruining my favorite smut site.
bier
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Is it done via google translate?
beachball boobs
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Why waste hd space with this gibberish...
blackwolf
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Same as your other uploads. Technically very poor and unreadable. Full of grammar/spelling mistakes. Poor description of characters.
No convincing storyline. Missing translation.
Cheers.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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