The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Winterstein
XD
short =).... a bit more than 200 word ! 
Average Scores:

tsokei
Overall= 1, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 1

Well, now I know to check the comments first. -_-

the last knight to sat NI!
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

What? Huh? Is this even English? My brain hurts from trying to understand this ridiculous excuse of a story. I think I'll go have a lie down.

Winterstein's lover
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Best story on this archive by far! Please ignore all of the "1" ratings below, they are all posted by the same person who has a personal vendetta against Winterstein. This is an epic tale of extraordinary fappable breast expansion and excitement that will keep you riveted until the very end. Hang on to your seats!!

MadMacs2010
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

OMFG! EPIC EPIC EPIC FAIL!, whoever wrote this needs to facedesk themselves repeatedly until they forget how to use the computer!

Sadly minus figures aren't available on this rating system

ingaginto
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

EPIC FAIL LEARN TO WRITE BEFORE YOU POST

Shura
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

lol, some people actually took it as a real story! That's why trolls will never cease to exist.

bobGrimer
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

go to the first comment. save some clicking.

mr.doctor
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

there was no story and tons of mistakes

o.O
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

An expert troll would of made a 20,000 word piece that would be interesting and engaging- but devoid of any fappable material whatsoever.

idontknow
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

YOU! No more internets for you!

<.<
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

The trolls have arrived!

Wordmaster
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

I am with Blooman on this one. What the fuck happened to quality?!!!I am even hard pressed to be able to cal this a story at all.

Grammar people!!! GRAMMAR!!!! I am getting fed up with the recent string of absolutelly rubbish stories that has been submittet this year.

I would advise those who run this site, to have a little more quality control. Stories like this should not be allowed to be posten before they have been corrected.

I am not saying that the stories has to be perfect, everybody makes misstakes, but this!!! This is ludicrous!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Bwahahaha
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Lol

SmartMan
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

1 means good right

Matt
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

That was the worst I've ever read. Ever.

Blooman
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

What the FUCK happened to any standards of quality here?!

Jesus jumpingjacks Christ this is embarrassing.

D
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Oh lordy

perdil
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

not even worth a comment

Professor
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Truly, this is the dawn of a new age of intellectual smut. I, for one, welcome Winterstein to continue to honor our humble community with his skilled works.

OmniTrixie
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

For those considering whether to download the story and checking the reviews first (along with people having trouble with the .wps formatting), let me save you some time. This is the entire tale, with no changes to the text.

"Well XD ……

JULIA AND LIN FOUND I AN LIBARY AN OLD BOOK MORE IN IT AN FOMULAR , THE PROBLEM WAS THERE LEFT THE PUBLIC AREA AND ENTER A PART OF IT ONLY FOR PERSONAL .

“ DIDN’T YOUR READ THE WARNING ; DO NOT ENTER THIS AREA WITHOUT AN PERMISSON “

JULIA ONLY LAUGHT

“ YOUR MEAN COME IN AND FIND OUT ? “

“ DON’T MAKE SUCH A FACE YOUR LOVELY EYES LOOK NOT REALLY SEXY “ , COME IF WE PICK UP ALL THE THING WE WILL HAVE FUN AND OWR BREAST WILL GROW “ .

FOR LIN WAS THIS ONLY A TRICK TO MAKE FUN OF ALL THE PEOPLE THERE WILL TEST THIS:

“ ARE YOUR REALLY SURE THIS WILL WORK ? “

“ COME PLEASE IF THIS WORK YOUR CAN MAKE MY BREAST SO BIG YOUR WAN’T HUGE LIKE WATERMELON ,ORE A HOLE ROOM , SO BIG YOUR WAN’T I WILL NEVER SAY THERE BIG ENOUGHT .

LIN BREATH OUT

“ ALLRIGHT THAN LET’S SEE IF THIS WORK WELL ORE NOT “

Epilog :

AFTER THIS WORK WELL BOTH OF THAN HAS BREAST BIG LIKE A ENTIRE CONTRY AND NIPPLE HUGE LIKE A ENTIRE CITY , AND PRAY TO GOD THERE WILL NEVER GIVE MILK ………..

And if your are Not 18 FAIL XD !"

It's not so much about warning you off as making sure everyone gets to suffer equally.

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