The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Ghost
Sassy
A bitchy boss becomes a big titted bimbo.
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Scramble_J
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

So glad your back! And even more pleased to see Melinda is back again as well making more bimbos for us all to enjoy. Really enjoyed the method used to make Sassy. I don't think I will ever read a Dear Abby again without thinking of this tale! :)

I hope we see more of Melinda and her charges such as Jewel and Missy. One has to wonder if some teacher or another student gets on her bad side. Hell I can even picture Sassy running into those two and them in awe of her totally awesome job and how she is such a career woman!

Here is hoping that more tales are around the bend!

-J-

Fahzbehn
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I think the only thing that could've made it better was if the character, that was fired earlier walked in on or was having sex with her in the end. All and all a good story.

Sysop
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I too am a fan of your work. I like the revenge plot lines that you write. You did a really great job with a creative idea for BE (the advice column). Please keep it up!

HashTag
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Big fan of your work. All of your plot synopses are hilarious.

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