thegreygreyman@gmail.com
I feel a little foolish uploading the same story for a 3rd time, but people seemed to have trouble with opening the other version, so this one is a PDF. Hopefully, people can view that format. I aim to please. I was thinking about possibly writing a sequel at some point, depending on people's response. However, I can only see this story becoming MORE over-the-top if it continued, so doing so might take away instead of add to the quality of the story. A good story should leave you wanting more, not less. I hope that is the case here.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 2.00
- Characters: 5.00
- Technical: 2.50
Lion God
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Albeit lacking on technical details, an amazing work.
You're really talented at this, and likely, at writing in general.
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 5, Technical= 2
I know you said it was imprefect. Many syntax errors, like conciseness for consciousness, led for lead etc.
I did enjoy the sotry though. Its a frash idea on transmorphing. Ch 2? I say go for it, and put him in Firsts body w/ the 7000ccs. Now that would be a great starting point. Then have him f*ck some other earth males. Over the top enough?
Oh and stick w/ the PDF, its highly preferable, at least to me. Ive seen others commnet that they only want txt files. I can't for the life of me think why, but thats just me.
Did you write his w/ Dragon software? Just wondering, it kind of seems like it just rolled off your tongue.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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