The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Volt Namazuros
Namazuros@gmail.com
A Slip of the Tongue
Maybe Serene should think twice before calling on a demon to satisfy her own selfish needs, especially when she can't watch her mouth...
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JD
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

I liked it. For me, I get tired of being a woman in charge constantly, there's a sexual feeling of helplessness and lack of control that I like (without it being rape, ick.) Thank you for your stories!

lol
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

i think some furs would take offense to this being called a furry story, or series of stories i should say. The whole line looks to be a cookie cutter assembly with just a slight change in plot but its always wizard taking revenge with spell, or normal person taking revenge with magic item and then transformation into cat girl, dog girl or some such. what we have here is less a series of BE stories than a bag of animal crackers...

MrHHH
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

One whole sentence of BE. Was this ever a BE story or did you grab some random furry story and insert the single sentence?

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