The Overflowing Bra

I would love to see you continue this story. Part one is among my all time favorites of BE stories.

When will new chapters be released?

Okay this and much of your other work are amazing, however this story took me a few paragraphs before I actually figured out where this was going but after Mike and the hallway scene showed up it all became clear I can't wait to see where your taking these characters so keep up your almost novel like work.

One of the better writing styles on this site! Really seems like something that could be found in a bookstore. Reminds me of the Heir series (Warrior/Wizard/Dragon). Keep t up. Want to know more about what's going on.

The background stories in part 1 and part 2 are way too long.

Your commitment to the atmosphere of high school is clear. I admire it. Although the sex scene let me down a little (I wasn't sure who was in control), I am looking forward to the "developments" of Jacob, Becky, and your whole cast of characters.

You have created a very interesting and compelling world in these "Touch" stories. These characters are interesting and have depth. I am very interested to see where these intertwining go. I get the feeling that there is some larger story being told and I like that. These stories aren't just about BE and sex. There's clearly more and as an avid comic book reader, I'm very interested in seeing what's coming. Excellent work. Keep it up!

Your stories seem to really do what they are meant to.  This one in particular, it'd be nice to get to know the three characters better; they are described very carefully physically (except Jacob), but their internal qualities aren't as clear.  From what I've seen, the characters also are not as likeable as one might hope - but that lends a realistic air, even in the midst of the crazy occurrences.  Keep up the great work!

@Roid, I totally hear you and I promise that it will all tie together.  Mike got the whole intro to himself in chapter 1 and so I went back to the first day to thread Becky and Jacob into the same timeline.  We already know everything that happened with Mike.. so he won't factor back into the plot until their sub-stories catch up to his in a couple more chapters.. but don't worry, he plays a Major role from that point on.  Try to enjoy the new characters.. they have a lot to offer.

This was a well-written story, but I was strangely disappointed, or rather, left unfulfilled.  I suppose the dissapointment is because it had no material link (that I could see, at least yet) to the previous chapter.
Perhaps wait to write two new chapters (where the second -- which would be the third overall -- links back), instead of piecemealing chapters with new characters that seem to have no link.

Awesome.  I loved it.  I gave you a 4 on technical because there were a few typos.  I can't wait for the next chapter!

Excellent characters, good descriptions of thoughts and motivations.  It will be interesting to see what might be causing all of this paranormal activity at the school.  You have hinted at sinister shades and plots.  Regardless, hopefully these young innocents can find their way in a world that suddenly has different rules for them.

@Chaos, yes, everything with Jacob and Becky will be revealed...soon.

Please tell me you will reveal a) what kind of gift Jacob has and b) what REALLY happened in the classroom with that pervert in your next chapter? Keep up the good work on BOTH this series as well as STX. 
"without chaos there is no order"

That was insane, but very well-done.

Now why did you go and ruin my childhood when you made Belle look like that? Please don't pay attention to the rating. I'm only commenting on the picture alone. This rating doesn't count.

Fine. Fine!  I'll go back and continue work on STX.  By the way, on STX Part 2, did any of you actually bother to look up the longitude/latitude in the second sentence of the Computer Autolog?  Don't forget to zoom in and switch it to satellite view.

This shit is great but I want more STX!