The Definitive BE Story Archive
This is a draft caught somewhere in between a completely new version and what you already read. If have or haven't read the original I would recommend reading this version. It's much more developed. I tried to keep the criticism I got in mind. Aureole Baker, on a student exchange trip in Paris, discovers a strange pastry shop that will change her life.
- Overall: 4.40
- BE: 3.60
- Characters: 3.80
- Technical: 4.60
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