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The Overflowing Bra

Vicky & Victoria, Part 1
When Vicky unexpectedly inherits the ancestral home of her family, it seems like a bit of a let down at first.  As she begins to find out more about her family history though, big things begin to happen, and changes which she had never imagined start to effect her.
Average Scores:

Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

shocklingly good writing. And very fun read.

Love all these storys your're putting out.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Lucky for me that I stopped frequenting this site as often; I have downloaded all 4 parts and am frankly, amazed. I don't remember if I've said this before, but I'm a big fan of your work, especially the self-controlled (or out of control) expansions, and this is possibly the best yet, with gobs of promise for the other three, if your other stories are any indication of quality and overall expansion-ness.

Well done.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Great idea, great execution. The quality of the prose here is head and shoulders above the run of the mill. Complaints about typos etc are missing the forest for the trees: this is very well written.

I like the characters well, though they don't have that many distinguishing characteristics. I know that my own tastes would urge for a man in the picture, but I can see that this story has direction that a man might disturb at this stage, and I always urge authors to follow their own passion.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very well written. Fantastic sir, I loved it, would like a size reference the next time she gets that big, the idea that her butt was so large she couldn't reach the floor, and if I read correctly, could only touch her hips, was... delicious? That sounds creepy. Whatever. Keep it up!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

This was very well-written. I think I'm not the only one looking forward to your next, whenever that may come. Bravo!

Mr. Justaguy
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

A real gem! I personally don't tend to enjoy expansions that get to the sizes described in the dream sequence but the highly imaginative and descriptive writing style made this story very enjoyable. I hope we get to see more slow expansion in future chapters. Might be nice to see Vicky interact with someone who hasn't seen her since before the growth began as well but that's just a thought, either way please do a part 2!

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

One of the best submissions ever

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

It's very descriptive and I'm a fan of type of expansion. Looking forward to seeing more.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 3

Aside from a few grammatical errors, this story was excellent. I hope you make the sequel soon!

Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

I was pretty bummed once I discovered there wasn't going to be a sex scene. The dream transformation seemed to go on forever. You've got a few strange typo's, and your similes are very hit or miss. Even with these three complaints, I'll be waiting for that (inevitable I hope) lesbian sex scene.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

very good! very descriptive and original way of having the expansion play out

i was worried that the dream was real, because i am looking forward to having a slower expansion.

your best yet, keep it up!

Ninja In The Night
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

You are completely evil sir, that is the basis of this review. You write perfectly wonderful unique stories and make us wait for such things as time, inspiration, and free time. *Just joking* Seriously, great story, can't wait to see what happens. I truly wonder just how large they can get this time. I am literally ajumble while I wait for the next chapter. Great to see you writing another series.

Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Absolutely unbelievable! This is the best story by far that I have read in this forum for at least a year. Great job! I hope to see much more from you.

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