masterxodin@yahoo.com
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Jin is a young witch casting a ritual in the basement of her house. What powerful magic is she using and what toll will it take on her body? A quick and to the point story about breast and belly expansion. Readers get to decide in advance how far the expansion goes :)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 5.00
- BE: 4.44
- Characters: 4.22
- Technical: 4.89
Erazor
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
good stuff
love the choices
CC
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
badass man love that you can choose cool feature. We need some new material though.
Natas
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Really enjoyed this. Hope that the second story is just as interesting and coming along soon. Keep up the good work.
Coffee Pilot
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Great job. Nice little bit of programming to make the story customizeable, also like that this gives it re-read value. Writing was good too, nice descriptions of the various physical changes
christov84
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great!
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Excellent story. Short enough to hold interest. Long enough to get the point across. Controls were excellent. Keep up the good work.
Chris
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Excellent story, loved the controls.
Erazor
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I liked the idea that i as the reader have to some content control over the story :D
next time make a longer story
Cheers
sigley89
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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