The Overflowing Bra

It seemed pretty dull to be honest and yet another revenge fantasy story? They're getting pretty unbearable and creepy by now.

I understand dropping us nearly into the midst of the action, but it seems like a little backstory would help this one a lot. Even a brief rundown of the other girls would have been helpful, as I quickly lost track of them, and had no idea why one would have something happen to her as opposed to another. Explaining about the different types of soap would have helped too. 

This is a very welcome addition and we're all hoping you keep writing.

Very well done. I enjoyed it from start to finish.

Paragraphs, Paragraphs, PARAGRAPHS! After the first few paragraphs everything is in one big text block. Go back and read "The Elements of Style" and see how paragraphs work...don't worry, it's a short book. Second, the "revenge" idea is interesting, but revenge for WHAT? The writing is so bad that there is no reason for the girl to wreak such revenge.
Third, the characters are so cardboard that we can't care for them OR their breasts. Finally, only one girl wants to keep her expanded breasts? That kind of betrays the whole purpose of the story. This work could have been exciting, but you need to rewrite it, beef up the characters and give them some reason for their specific breast enhancements.

I love the concept, but can't say I care for everyone getting better at the end, I was hoping for more.  Plus some description of what happened to Lisa would've been nice.