The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Big Mistake
Transhuman
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amberdawn
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 5

Super hot. Don't mind the shallow characters, you said all we really need to know; everybody's Ken and Barbie like. So anyway, super hot concept, neat take on online persona. More breast expansion description is always better. Good stuff, though.

Xhuman
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Transhumanism is not about creating a totalitarian society.

Mr. Justaguy
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

A fun premise and a good story. Could use a little more fleshing out (no pun intended) especially in the characters. Never really got a sense of the main character's personality.

Amononous
Overall= 2, BE= 2, Characters= 2, Technical= 4

The overall story wasn't bad, but the character was really 2 dimensional and had no discernible personality. the process also was very quick and had not much in the way of description other than DD cup->f cup.

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