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The Overflowing Bra

MassiveAttack
A Growing Relationshit
A short first story I made in my free time about a young couple that experiences a whole new level of love
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Fucktard
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

At least you got the shit part right.

P.S. Learn to spell, asshole.

Munkie
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Very bad. Please pass a basic English class and try again.

Infame
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

I was hoping that at the bottom it was going to say 'sent from my iPhone'

OmniTrixie
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

Makes you wonder what kind of keyboard was used. P and T generally aren't that close together.

Anonymous
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

rolf @ Slack.

Slack
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1

I am wondering if the typo in the title is more of a Freudian slip...

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