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Chloe finds herself trapped in a room filled with balloons. But someone is watching her from behind a window in the wall, eager to explain what is about to happen to her. (Illustrated by Nexus T)
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.46
- BE: 3.69
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.77
Tygirl9
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I love this story and love the idea.I see it perfectly on my netbook and I love it.
eekee
Overall= 2, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
The pictures were beautiful but my overall enjoyment was spoiled badly by being hardly readable when it was fitted on my screen. I'm sure I'm not the only person who likes to read their porn in bed, and I know I'm not the only person who finds any portable computer larger than a netbook (or even an iPad) to be not worth carrying about. I'm not going to buy a large-screen laptop just for porn! ;)
Anyway, like I said, the pictures are delicious, and what I could understand of the text was pretty cool stuff. It's just the format. HTML would have suited better, I use Opera which has a neat fit-to-width feature which does not shrink the text - perfect for porn, in all honesty.
Abbeygirl
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I love Nexus T's morphs and the story meshes brilliantly with the images. Could have been a little longer and I'd have liked a bit more development of the BE, but basically I loved it. More please!
BEster
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Keep it going! I loved it!
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I'm not much into belly inflation, but the opening picture got me. Great concept, great story length, just the right amount of INCREDIBLE pictures! I really hope that the author & the pixelator can get together on a true BE story. Please?
LikeEmBig
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Kind of lost me there at the end, but overall good story. Would have liked more BE.
Nowballoonenthusiast
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Amazing, hope there is another
G-man001
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Nearly flawless short story. A concise, well executed tale. The pictures are amazing. Please more in the future. The morphs are.so awesome, and pregnancy ones have rarely been accomplished as well as this set. While the balloon thing was strange at first, through the story and the pics I began rooti.g for it. Please another! Don't make us wait!
PMP101
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I hope we might get to find out what happens next!
Sandman
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 5
Enjoyed this very much. Hope to see more and longer next time! Great illo's!
Fill
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Wow, awesome Lucky! Its been a long time since you last posted! I hope you write more!
PinkLisa
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
This is my cup of tea. Loved it. can't wait to read more of your work.
Anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Not quite my cup of tea, but very, very good writing. Perhaps next time a little more attention to the breasts? I can't wait to see more from you!
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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