The Overflowing Bra

What I find so inteersting is you could never find this anywhere else.

Good, but not great. The characters need more backstory, and in general more backstory is needed. The be part could have lasted longer too.

I like it.  Seems well written and it sets itself up for an interesting storyline.  I'd like it if you explored the girl's background a bit.  Please continue writing!  

I enjoyed reading the story very mutch, please continue.

A person with a special talent that harms his/her aptitude in other areas? Sounds like a savant to me. However, you have other terms that do not fit. The wrong words 'sound' right if you say them aloud, but visually they are erroneous.
Your story 'interested' the reader because you introduced something new. This fades over time, so design the 'unique' toward the characters rather than the reader. You have more control over them than us.

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Savant is the correct term. The primary definition is a learned individual. The secondary definition is in relation to "idiot savant"
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Very nice start to a story please continue

I really like this story.  You need a bit of work on the grammar, but the flow is good and the story is pretty strong.

Grammar needs work but that is not what this is about. Good story, good build up. Don't leave us hanging! Write another!

I'm hoping the quality of the eroticism improves with the grammar.

Grammar needs some polishing, but concept and application is good.

Great content, great descriptions, but the lack of proofreading really hurt the story. I look forward to reading the rest of this series/story.

The story was quite good, and I have few complaints regarding it.
I'm posting this review almost entirely because of another commenter, who has made the mistake of deciding that he/she is the unfailing arbiter of vocabulary. The word 'savant' does not, in fact, apply solely to mentally handicapped people. The term itself means "a person of profound or extensive learning," and as such fits quite well with the story.
Otherwise, I'm anticipating the next seven or so parts you're considering writing, and I'm quite confident you'll get better with each release.

I do not cafre that there were some wrong word usage as this was not submitted to an English 101 class but to a site for erotic stories. I found it very creative and enjoyed the transformations. Keep up the great work and I'd like to see more of this story!

Okay, look. Savant is a term that applies to a person who is mentally handicapped but still has some incredible talent. I think the word you're looking for is "prodigy." "Pervy" means someone who is considered perverted. "Purvey" means to sell or supply. "Wile" means cleverness; "while" is a point in time. Etc. Basically, you need some serious help in the vocab and grammar department. 
The transformation style you've written out is interesting, though. I assume you've left this open for some type of sequel, since it ended abruptly.