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The Overflowing Bra

Plato Voltaire
desslok@cox.net
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A die-hard follower of Mr. Big has kidnapped the grandchildren of New Darwin's police heroes. Will the veterans find them in time before the kidnapper achieves his revenge? Includes 15 pics commissioned from Litch.
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 jonny appfield
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Good stuff pv
 Xtra
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
Very good. Write more!
 Fourshot
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5 
I noticed a few typo's but otherwise classic Voltaire! thanks for coming out of retirement!
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