Erin is looking for that extra “umph” to her figure that will drive her boyfriend wild! She then learns about her boyfriend’s obsession with huge breast implants and realizes if she wants him to look at her the same way he looks at porn stars then she has to get implants too.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.90
- BE: 4.80
- Characters: 4.90
- Technical: 4.80
"Double"
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
As the original commissioner of this story, of-course I'm a little biased ;-)
But seriously - look at the other comments above. Plus, your work is so good that "Company Ink" was bought and published at The B.E. Story Club. Please consider writing more of this 'realistic' B.E.-via-Breast-Implants style, or perhaps continuing stories, like "The Wow Factor".
Thank-You!!!!!!!!!!
Charon
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Fantastic story! Please continue to write more like it!
deus
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Another great story. There were a few spelling/grammar issues, but otherwise my only complaint is that it's a little short.
deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Good quality overall. The story seemed to end rather abruptly though, but I guess you deliberately left it as a cliff-hanger?
Blasto
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Another work of art. Wow. just wow. you are such a good fkng author.
maybeenuf4u
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
I really liked the story. It reminded me of the old days from BE archive!
brianm
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Thanks for another amazing story!
Wow, indeed!
PLEASE write more often! Your stories are the best on the site!
gamer2113
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
outro
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
GOD i LOVE your stories!!!!!
jlf_roze
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You are a Genius my friend..!!!!
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