The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

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Lust and Anxiety
Charlie's wife loves him.  A lot.  Frequently.  He finds her irresistable.  She gives him everything he wants, but Charlie wonders if this treatment is really healthy.  

This story gets straight to business.  fans of Stewy and Hunter S Creek should enjoy.  Shrinking Man and light fem-dom vibes.
Average Scores:

tstar
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

typical,mommy fetish-sm.it would be better to focus on her growth instead.it would have been better for her to grow and tear slowly out of her clothing.

reader
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4

Nice Story, I'd like a sequel too, where we got a bit more background-Information

pillager
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

More please.

I'd love to know more backstory about Selene.

Duuude
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Well done!! I gave you fours because it was a bit short. Please more!!

Beetlebomb
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Absolutely love this. I only wish it was as long as Stewy's or Hunter S. Creek's stories-- then I'd be writing this review in caps!

pretty imperfect
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4

Very well done but I'm getting tired of 'tiny man' stories.

evlynn64
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

can you send me more like this

J
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Total points to balance out the idiotic "review" of Greener21

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