desslok@cox.net
After discovering one other world that survived an interplanetary civil war the females on a 2nd Union ship undergo breast expansion. Just how large will Hazel, the shortest woman on board, get? Plato's 44th story and the first one in over seven years.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.80
- BE: 2.80
- Characters: 3.20
- Technical: 4.20
Xtra
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Daiyuki
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
That was actually pretty well-written, but very vague and lacking in any kind of character development. Not much of a triumphant return by any standard.
fourshot
Overall= 5, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
welcome back! you were missed!
brit
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 5
Great read, though i wish there was more detail on the BE itself. i.e. how the girls felt day to day, embarrassing wardrobe malfunction moments, etc.
deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Good to have you back PV. the story's a good read and reminded me of the heyday of BE story writing back in the mid-90's. I note that you had all the measurements in metric. :)
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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