the_almighty_wolf_lord@yahoo.co.uk
Average Scores:
- Overall: 2.20
- BE: 1.60
- Characters: 1.30
- Technical: 1.30
Parasite King
Overall= 5, BE= 2, Characters= 3, Technical= 1
i loved this stuff, it would be perfect, if there was a bit more BE and i butt-load more grammar.
R@gnaroCker
Overall= 3, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
My first posting was better than this, and yet I got primarily slagged. Still, yeah, it's as if you didn't care about grammer at all. Usually, considering the content on this site, and that the stories are posted for free, I have more appreciation for the plots than the technical aspect of the writing. If a story gets the people horny (Why else they're here), then the plot has served its purpose. Again, if you don't bother improving your grammer, don't bother posting. It was that bad, even for me.
mtb
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Out of all the stories on here, you'd think the author of this one would have read a comment or two. Dude. Find your shift key. And find a different site to put this on. It's just unreadable.
an
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 1
I like your ideas, but i'm weird like that.
Please improve the grammar and spelling.
Also i prefer txt files, but not everyone does. Include more alternative file formats.
elvis interuptus
Overall= 2, BE= 4, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
anon
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
Well, it could be better, we all gotta start somewhere though.
I came to bitch about the obnoxious file format. :\
seriously
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
Paul Cullen
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
anon
Overall= 2, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 2
wrong 'market' for the story.
OmniTrixie
Overall= 1, BE= 1, Characters= 1, Technical= 1
I made it past 'comeing threw the roof'. I wish I hadn't.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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