Conan the Barbarian has heard of a magic sword which will make him invincible, but can he survive the test of the fertile forest goddess who guards it jealously?
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.25
- BE: 3.50
- Characters: 3.75
- Technical: 4.00
anonymous
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 3
It's spelled "Forest".
Well done otherwise, though. No read depth, but that's not what you're looking for in a story like this. Perhaps slow down a little?
pillager
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Awersome story.
Captures the pulp era quite well.
Keep up the great work!
Thag13
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Robert E Howard would be proud!
Some minor misspellings, and a bit more descriptions of the Be would have been nice. But as a nice nod to the pulp era masters, it was very well done.
deux_anges
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Like the writing style and plot but there wasn't quite enough description of the actual BE or pregnancy.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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