The year is 2011 in the Altaerna universe: Biology student Cornelia “Connie” Prince, a straight A student from her tests to her chest, rediscovers an old secret. Marge, her feisty kinda-sorta BFF, soon learns that the shy, bookish girl carries quite a lot of baggage…
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.50
- BE: 4.81
- Characters: 4.44
- Technical: 4.50
hargle
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, loved it. Also, stupidsexymarge - 'nuff said.
Z
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Sigley
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
I'm really looking forward to more.
Blank
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
A good start. I'm curious where the story will branch to from this opening (pun not intended).
namrego
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Crazyste
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Alex
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Holy fuck that's hot. I hope the next part will be even better.
dfw
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Quite nice! Looking forward to the next installment
reine
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
As good as every, and that is pretty good.
SkeetSkeet
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Loved the story, can't wait for the sequel.
thumb's up
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Waiting for what happens next
idontknowwhoiam
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
excellent as always cant wait for more!
Apple
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
You are one of the best writers we have.
jjmastsfunk
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
Bahamad
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
I love where the story begins. You also show how this isn't just going to be a re-face of Yrba (though I don't know if anyone would complain about that either) with a different writing/dialect style.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 4
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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