addicted2boobies@hotmail.co.uk
This is the first time I've written a story focusing on a breast expansion theme, and was done at the request of a fan of my more normal works. Please don't be too harsh, and I would really appreciate any pointers and advice.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.00
- BE: 3.67
- Characters: 3.00
- Technical: 3.33
Sucker4Boobs
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 3
Very nice. Do I smell a sequel in the works?
Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
It was a good little story... And no, you don't have to change the age. I'm fairly certain we're all aware teen girls masturbate and this is a fetish site so people don't judge other fetishes! Don't change a thing, I approve!
Gopherspace
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 1, Technical= 3
that was adequate, 2 things:
1. MAKE YOUR CHARACTERS OLDER
2. .txt can be a bit of a problematic format, consider using .rtf or .html instead.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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