sonicbland@aol.com
Due to the actions of an unscrupulous corporation, an innocent woman is chosen to be a test subject for a device that turns females into the perfect sex partners.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 3.86
- BE: 4.00
- Characters: 4.00
- Technical: 4.57
SMAP
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Very well written; you did a good job developing the plot and the scenes all flow pretty nicely. Sittin' on the weird side of the fence, but that's not something that bothers me much. >.>
Would love to see some more of the story (or whatever else) if you're feeling up for it.
Hotstuff
Overall= 3, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Seems to have included about everything. Well written.
namego
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
very original and with lots of new narrative elements in this story, good job
AWWW
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Awesome story. Great balance of breast growth and other genres.
chase v
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
OmniTrixie
Overall= 1, BE= 3, Characters= 2, Technical= 4
Rating it as a horror story which achieved the genre's goal.
john
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 3
How shem is it? just curious
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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