The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

PyroWildcat
Short Scene: Getting Served
A short scene based off of a picture by the one and only test-0. An athletic girl a little too full of herself gets whats coming to her.
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Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

Very enjoyable. I kind of want a sequel to it now.

Rail
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5

I really enjoy all of your short stories, and I hope you continue writing.

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