The Definitive BE Story Archive

The Overflowing Bra

Zero Zyzzyx
Blissful Ignorance
Alexis has the weight of the world on her shoulders; she's broke, she's miserable, and she's stuck on a trip with a group of chirpy teens.  And while she can't stand them, deep down what bothers her is how easy it is for them to be happy...


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Anonymous
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

very good!

Dan
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 3

Excellent!!

Ghost
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Enjoyable

Figment
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Well done, wish there was more!

elvis interuptus
Overall= 4, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Not my kink at all, but very well written.

Genoharden
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5

Wonderful!!

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