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A quick story I did this morning. His girlfriend having just dumped him, Alex is surprised when his best friend, Carry, shows up. When they both lament about not finding finding the perfect girlfriend, Carry does something to fix the situation. More to come most likely.
Average Scores:
- Overall: 4.22
- BE: 3.78
- Characters: 4.11
- Technical: 4.44
hot
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Drakiara
Overall= 4, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 4
OmniTrixie
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
I really just wanted to give Mr. HHH a 5-5-5-5 for the perfect review. :)
MrHHH
Overall= 3, BE= 3, Characters= 3, Technical= 4
Part I? Don't you mean Page 1?
KV Vehemens
Overall= 4, BE= 2, Characters= 4, Technical= 3
Good premise. I think it could have done with a little back story, and be a bit longer. That's just me though, I like longer/slower transformations sometimes. Overall good though! Part 2 soon I hope?
Jwduke
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
voodoo
Overall= 5, BE= 4, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
I think its great. I would love if there was more
Lost_Knight
Overall= 5, BE= 5, Characters= 5, Technical= 5
Great story, through and through. Looking forward to part 2 mate.
Zzie
Overall= 4, BE= 3, Characters= 4, Technical= 5
Good writing, but short overall and left me wanting more. That's ok though, since it's only pt 1.
Please give the authors feedback, I can not emphasize enough how important it is to them.
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